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Weathered Dreams

21:58 Feb 22 2010
Times Read: 706




I feel as cracked as an old weathered step.

Washed and worn by countless rains

Pounding feet leaving behind

The dirt and scars of their passing.



These thoughts I pondered

As I watched the rain fall

Splashing upon the wooden steps

The dirt trailing off in rivulets of mud.



How sweet it would be to wash it all away

The pain and sorrows of my human life

Until like the weathered step I’d become

Swept clean and ready to begin again.



My cracks now filled with the putty of friendship

My heart reopened to the possibility of love

My arms open to new experiences

My mind no longer closed.


COMMENTS

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Elemental
Elemental
23:50 Feb 22 2010

I like :)





meeper
meeper
04:33 Feb 23 2010

I seconded that.





temporary2
temporary2
01:17 Mar 01 2010

Lovely poem, dear friend. I have missed you. I am still very ill but will be on as I can.





food4thought
food4thought
04:01 Mar 01 2010

Very good. I enjoyed this very much. Great metaphore is rain.





lestatsowner
lestatsowner
19:40 Nov 15 2010

I love this poem





lestatsowner
lestatsowner
23:44 Nov 26 2010

this one is really nice








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